Wednesday 20 April 2016
100WC Challenge 1-Pizza Man
The deathly silence was interrupted by the loud grumbling of my friend's stomach. We were having a sleepover. We were anxiously waiting for the knock on the door. We looked at the clock. 7:10. Five minutes to go. Ages later, we checked it again. 7:11. A minute had passed. I stared down the dark hallway. Suddenly there was a knock. So I ran down the hallway to the front door. The door opened and there it was... My friends cheered! On the doorstep was a rather confused pizza man. So I collected the pizza and we all enjoyed our dinner.
Lauren
Grade 5
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Ooh! You've made me hungry for pizza!
ReplyDeleteWell written, Lauren. You have really created a feeling of expectation and of how slowly time passes when you are keen or excited about something.
Keep up the good work!
Mrs S.
Well done, Lauren. I love your opening sentence!
ReplyDeleteOoh! You've made me hungry for pizza!
ReplyDeleteWell written, Lauren. You have really created a feeling of expectation and of how slowly time passes when you are keen or excited about something.
Keep up the good work!
Mrs S.