Thursday 5 May 2016
The Great Wall
The Recently, three people on tour met in China. They wanted to go to the Great Wall of China, but just didn't know how to get there. "I know!" said the man from India. "We could take the bus." "No, no!" said the British man. "They're way too dirty!" "How about a donkey?" Suggested the Pakistani man. "Oh deary me! Definitely not!" yelped the British man. "Might fall off and break a nail!" "Oh well, we'll have to walk then." said the Pakistani man. "Well you two have fun." "I'm going to go back to the hotel to drink tea." The others went to the Great Wall while he drank tea.
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Well done, Lauren. You really followed the challenge brief well and made good use of direct speech. I love that you looked carefully at what the people were wearing to give them a nationality - great attention to detail!
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Mrs S.
This made me laugh, Lauren! I would definitely drink tea too, if it were me. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThis made me laugh, Lauren! I would definitely drink tea too, if it were me. Well done!
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