Lauren, grade 5
It was a Monday morning. The teacher was droning on about something that felt too complicated for me to understand. Luckily I had a secret hoard of food under my desk. I quietly reached for a sweet and popped one in my mouth. Suddenly, out of the corner of my eye, I saw a paper jet. Some kids in my row had started to fly them around the classroom. One soared right past Mrs. Eagley's nose. Luckily she didn't notice. I started to crunch on a packet of chips. Suddenly Mrs Eagley looked up. "WHO IS EATING IN MY CLASS?!" She screamed. Then she looked right at me. "KAREN!" Oh dear.
Who, me?? Never! How funny, Lauren!
ReplyDeleteWell done, Lauren. I enjoyed this piece of writing and I enjoyed your use of humour too. Speech should not usually be written in capital letter, but I get that you are implying that the teacher is shouting. Well done.
Mrs S.
This was such an interesting poem! I feel bad for Karen, though.
ReplyDeleteI love your blog! I like how you ended it with "Oh dear".
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